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THE N E S T ([personal profile] onemind) wrote 2016-03-11 06:22 am (UTC)

R E V I S I O N S

REVISIONS
Thank you so much for applying! Before we can make the final call, we’d just like to see some adjustments made to the following:
⦿ Much of Lexa’s personality section as presented hinges heavily on her interactions with Clarke. We’d like to see a little more exploration of her character outside the context of that relationship.
⦿ We’d like to see more specificity in Lexa’s symbiote ability and three fully well rounded stages with both pros and cons. If she’s super heating her body temperature, does she need flame retardant clothing? Are there certain materials that are more difficult for her to melt? How does this affect Lexa physically? Is there a biological drawback to super-heating her organic matter? Can she produce heat indefinitely or does using the ability for a prolonged amount of time wear her out? You don’t need to answer all these questions, but consider them when developing Lexa’s ability further.

Please make sure to get your revisions back within 48 hours and to clearly mark the revisions made in your app. If you need an extension due to RL circumstances, feel free to contact us!

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