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THE N E S T ([personal profile] onemind) wrote 2016-04-12 12:49 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

REVISIONS
Thank you so much for applying! Before we can make the final call, we’d just like to see some adjustments made to the following:
⦿ While we feel you've done a good job outlining Petre's demonic aspects and his overall personality traits, we feel like we don't have a good idea of how he thinks and what his personal motivations are. Just a few extra additions on what drives Petre would be great; it's okay if he doesn't have any long term goals, but giving us a better sense of his value system and what's important to him (other than Diana) would help us to better understand his character.

Please make sure to get your revisions back within 48 hours and to clearly mark the revisions made in your app. If you need an extension due to RL circumstances, feel free to contact us!

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